Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In current days, many dangerous illnesses and deaths are caused by smoking cigarettes and tobacco products, so preventing people from unhealthy things is the leading mission of governments to keep local health. Personally, I totally agree with the opinion because of following reasons.
Admittedly, one may argue that if people can have a choice to utilize cigarettes in the smoking areas, they will not harm anybody. It is true that many restaurants, shopping malls, and work stations have several smoking areas to serve people who want to utilize cigarettes or tobacco items. However, this dangerous trend to switch normal people to addicts is the main reason why local health dramatically drops, so the appearance of new laws from authorities can prevent the number of addicted users. For example, if authorities ban all smoking places and enforce new laws-related the utilization of cigarettes, the number of cigarettes’ users will noticeably decrease and they will abandon cigarettes step by step.
Granted, one might argue that cigarettes and tobacco products are the high-tax items, so if the government encourages this kind of business, they can dramatically develop their national economy. It is true that with the enormous amount of money coming from taxes, governments can develop their national facilities which play an important role in attracting visitors from different countries. In contrast, businesses which rely on local people’s health are unacceptable and the leading factor which will decrease the number of local residents.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the opinion because keeping local residents’ health is an effectively crucial method to develop the national economy, and if the smoking areas can not exist, the government will easily control the utilization of cigarettes and tobacco products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of cigarettes and tobacco products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52296819788 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85240660696 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544169611307 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6708486983 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168683834079 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728316126864 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545784174115 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122182291923 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463341568239 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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