Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?
in the globe the majority of health issue raised by smoking which may lead to death. however, some people argued that the government should make it illegal, while others say that it is the right of the public to smoke because they are mature enough and aware of the consequences of smoking. I personally believe that tobacco should be made illegal. there are two principal reasons for it.
firstly, smoking can cause a noticeable problem in a person's body. which if remain untreated on time may lead to death .some of the very common issue regarding health is lungs diseases, mouth diseases, and infertility problems, ultimately that can cause cancer in vital organs. than survival is not possible. however, some people smoke because they think they are releasing stress. in addition, people who smoke can affect their health, as well as the passive smoker is also affected by active smokers.in this regard the government should make strong policies to declare it illegal and stop its production, by doing violation heavy charges should be imposed and send them to jail. for instance, a new report issued by the WHO, showing that 65% of death caused by smoking every year. and 25% of the people are infertile, while 15% of people have lungs and other chest problems. so authorities have to take serious actions.
secondly, most of the hospitals are restricted to very limited beds. despite the fact, smoking kills and causes damage to lungs and other parts, on one hand, there is an economic loss, on other it causes problems. people invest a major part of there finance on smoking .when their health effects they can find there way toward the hospitals, and another part of there finance is spent on recovering . in addition, hospitals have limited beds so they cannot adjust all `the patient in the hospital to be surveillance by doctors at the end they can lose there precious life and leave their families in a big troubles . for example a recent study has done in the western part of one of the Pakistani village by local NGO's. they concluded that most of the smokers die because of not proper awareness and they have less knowledge about smoking consequences, when asked about reasons of smoking, the majority of the people are in high stress, the other part of the study indicate the inadequate hospital's conditions.
yo sum up, governments should completely ban the production of tobaccos and cigarette making companies and impose a heavy fine and seal their companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49054725569 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.510362138 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22208826972 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678950981544 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509014481211 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148117251128 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396137863478 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.