Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media website does have risks. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, social networking sites have removed distance among all the people of the world by connecting them through the internet, while according to some people, it may become threatening to provide personal data on such websites. In this essay, we will discuss the pros and cos for utilizing social media.
Looking at the positive side, a majority of the people have an account on social networking sites such as the Facebook and Twitter, so they can easily search their near and dear ones on that and can contact them online. In other words, it has also hiked the social connectivity by uploading personal details on those websites, which allow people to see our profile and can communicate with each other. For example, after meeting on Facebook, many people fall in love and get married to spend their whole life together. Missing person can also be found out by uploading their image on Facebook and What's app and their life can be protected.
On the other hand, regarding the negative points, people may misuse the other's details which is easily available on social media and can cheat them for their prospect. Besides, we read many cases on the newspaper that terrorist organization such as ISIS have a fake account based on females to trap the soldiers for getting significant defence related data which leads to terrible terrorist activities in many countries. Apart from this, numerous updates on social media related to various issues like Casteism broadcasted by some people may result in riots in the community. Moreover, many children are addicted with social media and do not move outside and chit chat on Facebook, which is restricting their growth.
In conclusion, though social media has many drawbacks, we can not overlook its advantages. However, with technology and social awareness, we can secure our profile on social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...y uploading their image on Facebook and Whats app and their life can be protected. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51639928629 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2714156764 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248151373042 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113086176116 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793264569024 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187595520692 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790420524726 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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