Social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face to face contact in this century.Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people often use the media such as Facebook, twitter to communicate instead of face to face contact. Although the benefits of this are varied, the drawbacks, in my opinion, should be paid mor attention to.
One of the advantage is convenient in communication. We can meet anyone in anywhere and anytime that we want. My older sister, for example, who study at RMIT university in Sai Gon, and I can’t meet her anytime. But, with Facebook, I can contact and talk with her as she is at home. Furthermore, it helps us to save time . Early years ago, to meet someone, we must do something such as contact, arrange an appointment and so on. But now, through social media, meeting someone is so easy.
However, besides advantages, there are some disadvantages.First, it creates the distance between people and people.When we only meet someone through media in a long time and then meeting outside, it makes us feel strange . We will feel like losing the friendliness.
In conclusion, although some benefits mentioned above, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03314917127 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05255703505 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1928994309 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207439708163 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660335571643 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829204473041 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125167210146 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955150216386 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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