It is true that laws are the fundamental need of every nation because it describes the code of conduct for society for smooth functioning of all the activities. I strongly agree with the given statement as legislative policies ensure safety of the citizens.
To begin with , it cannot be denied that individual interest are protected only because of rules and laws. Laws help in maintaining peaceful environment in the country and reduced the level of crimes and mal- practices. For an example, in India the number of cases with regard to rapes ,murders have reduced owing to strict rules and laws against these types of activities .In addition, people can feel secure when government enforces rules regulations in each sector of the economy such as Primary, secondary and tertiary sector .Hence a country can build a better atmosphere for the society.
furthermore ,rules and laws plays important role in protecting the environment ,if there will be no rules for forest protection then deforestation will be increased and pose numerous threats for the society. Moreover, fundamental rights of the citizens can be protected with the help of laws because rules in ensure equality in the nation. Also, rules and regulation makes the society aware about penalty and punishment for various illegal work. consequently ,crime rate decrease due to the fear of prisonment .
in conclusion, rules and laws are very essential in the society so that violence and other crime activities can be eliminated government authorities does not only protect the residence of the country but also maintain a healthy and the Peaceful environment for the society.
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e safety of the citizens. To begin with , it cannot be denied that individual int...
^^
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imes and mal- practices. For an example, in India the number of cases with regard...
^^
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the number of cases with regard to rapes ,murders have reduced owing to strict rul...
^^
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d laws against these types of activities .In addition, people can feel secure whe...
^^
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...laws against these types of activities .In addition, people can feel secure when ...
^^
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these types of activities .In addition, people can feel secure when government e...
^^
Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s Primary, secondary and tertiary sector .Hence a country can build a better atmos...
^^
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...Primary, secondary and tertiary sector .Hence a country can build a better atmosphere...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...Primary, secondary and tertiary sector .Hence a country can build a better atmosphere...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... a better atmosphere for the society. furthermore ,rules and laws plays important role in...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tmosphere for the society. furthermore ,rules and laws plays important role in p...
^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rtant role in protecting the environment ,if there will be no rules for forest pro...
^^
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...nd punishment for various illegal work. consequently ,crime rate decrease due to the fear of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t for various illegal work. consequently ,crime rate decrease due to the fear of p...
^^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e decrease due to the fear of prisonment . in conclusion, rules and laws are very...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...crease due to the fear of prisonment . in conclusion, rules and laws are very ess...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19622641509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79187294833 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.279789658 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119094804889 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519067260824 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222832168383 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796686523071 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0091407777681 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.