Due to the rules and regulation, community exists in this world which cannot be altered, were people freedom to do anything as per they urge. I, indeed, concur with this statement.
There are several reasons why laws made in society could not be changed by the law makers according to the public demand. The predominant one is that in order to publish a law, government take advice from their co-workers before implementing it because they are awared about what is beneficial for society or what could be the detrimental for them. For example, in india, there is a fix law that Dj has been prohibited after 10pm in any kind of parties. Despite many requests of public, the authority did not accepted their appeal because they realize that other people would be disturbed while sleeping. Hence, certain rules retain the same.
Another reason is that capital or death punishment has been clipped for those who commit heinous crime. In other words, if people demand that it would br unfair for them to give such punishments, criminals would perform crime again because they would know that there is no strict punishment. As a result, many people can be harmed. Furthermore, recently, plastic bags have been banned as it wreaks the environment with many ways.If people had the freedom to use plastic as much as they can instead of paper and cloth bags. Many people would have suffers from many hazardous disease; Consequently, the authority should not take care about public appeals for changing such laws.
In conclusion, there are number of laws which are fruitful for people like banning of plastic bags, not allowing sound system after given time and keeping the capital punishment forever. Thus, i truly believe that the demand of public would not be finished, but authority does not need to change such laws which are beneficial for entire society.
- Health education is an essential aspect of community health Do you agree or disagree 76
- Airline Companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets Discuss whether this is positive or negative developments Give some examples based on your own experience 78
- These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development 84
- Airline Companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets Discuss whether this is positive or negative developments Give some examples based on your own experience 78
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
... in this world which cannot be altered, were people freedom to do anything as per th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y could not be changed by the law makers according to the public demand. The pred...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is beneficial for society or what could be the detrimental for them. For example...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'accept'
Suggestion: accept
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...t wreaks the environment with many ways.If people had the freedom to use plastic a...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42724509221 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.667864861 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122724570797 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435615118862 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502677701788 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825250713874 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576376745671 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.