Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Laws and principles indeed are the fundamental base to form a community. However, it is sometimes argued that the citizens should be given free rein to do whatever they want. I wholeheartedly disagree with this opinion.
First and foremost, laws and order play a critical role in building up a civil society. They ensure safety while leading all citizens to conduct moral acts. For example, to manage and prevent high-profile criminal cases from their occurrence, law enforcement agencies have introduced rules that strictly forbid all citizens from engaging in any crime of violating and murder. If the residents do not follow the rules, the offenders would have to face legal prosecution. In this way, the establishment of the legal framework has bound all people living in a community to the standard of acceptable behaviors, therefore serving the common good that contributes to a safe and organized society.
Additionally, I do believe that the absence of a penitentiary system could raise rates of civil unrest. As the citizens, in this case, have every right to do whatever they want, they might act above ethical and moral values. Consequently, there is a high chance of public disorder happening, which may even cause public riots against the general community. The excessive freedom to behave thereby indeed counteracting the positive effects it could have brought to society.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that a penitentiary system is essential for social progress in which has an important role in maintaining justice and equality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92765025234 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8273191079 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224972032326 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733801002959 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760757458822 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130314826695 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980700658263 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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