There is a controversial debate surrounding the issue of prohibition against all sorts of advertisement throughout the globe in this era. Some people claim that it does not contribute to any helpful outcomes to the societies, similarly, others assert that t even result in detrimental effects on the individuals. In my personal view, it is not viable to outlaw all sorts of ads since it would influence market and people life.
On the other hand, by the advent of advertisement, companies and manufacturers find efficient way to attract their customers. Prior to this, mere some especial factories that based on government investment could have the opportunity to have a significant sales. However, advertisement smooth the way for private or newcomers companies to acquire remarkable profit. For example, about thirty years ago, there were just one or two factories that had the most amount of sale in the market, although now there are several brands that possess high gain. Therefore, nowadays commercial trigger people sense of competition and companies tend to be more innovative to stay in the rivalry.
On the other hand, individuals life have affected by ads in a wide aspects. Broadcasting thousands number of commercials, producers give the opportunity to people in order to choose their determined commodity freely. People are not confined to buy limited ranges of the goods, although some of them are somehow tricky and luring. For instance, survey conducted by Asian University revealed interesting results. Accordingly, it manifestly illustrated that for each kind of product, there are at least 10 brands by various utilities in the bazaar. However, some of these brands does not have satisfactory proficiency and abuse the people feelings by puns.
To sum up, it is distinctively obvious that the importance of the advertisement is undeniable. Not only would it result in superior creativity by passing the times, but it would bring relief to people life no matter how marginal it is.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
- You have lost an important document recently Write to your manager regarding this and say What is the document How and when did it happen What did you do regarding this matter 79
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feautres, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say– Why are you moving to another house? – Describe your presen 78
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 81
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26791277259 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01804049574 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7542795728 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.6875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187003441509 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525074847345 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401476017987 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110461764821 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416366614494 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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