It seems to be a widespread concern that animals are on the verge of annihilation due to the action of human beings on land and in sea. There are several reasons related to this trend. However, solutions can be taken to mitigate those potential problems. This essay will analyse both causes and solutions for this issue.
There are a host of factors to which this problem can be attributed. The main reason is that human beings are destroying the natural habitat of wildlife. As people need more places for living and working, a huge amount of forest is being cut down in recent years, which is an alarming issue. Hence, some animals cannot find another living environment while others have difficulty adapting to their new surroundings. This undoubtedly causes creatures to be extinct. Another cause for this dilemma is that the activities of people including excessive fishing and exploitation are damaging the aquatic ecosystem. To illustrate, excessive fishing affect the food chain directly since it makes the quantity of fish decrease in a short time. Moreover, oil leak has killed thousands of marine animals.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, stricter punishment should be imposed on illegal exploitation of woods and fish. Secondly, the authority should require factories and companies to install systems handling waste properly. Thirdly, funds should be raised to help the endangered animals like gorillas in Borneo. Furthermore, the government can organize campaigns to raise people's awareness of protecting the environment.
In conclusion, human beings are responsible for the extinction of creatures as they are damaging the environment and animals' habitat. However, various measures can be implemented to tackle the problems that are certain to arise.
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- Societies would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purposes, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 89
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- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. 61
- The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 countries in Europe in 2005, 2009 and 2015, compared with the European average. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...olutions for this issue. There are a host of factors to which this problem can be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36933797909 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77571131829 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6548112296 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1052631579 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126531589589 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396229302474 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471840052624 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839092170341 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455723334613 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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