Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Climate change has been becoming a looming crisis in all over the world, whose corollaries are plaguing our life from the unprecedented flood in Europe, to the extreme heat in North America. A number of people opine that people should make effort to counteract this hostile phenomenon while others express their preference with coming to terms with it. From my own perspective, I ardently advocate the former proposal.
On one hand, it is agonizingly undeniable that human being has the most adverse effect on the environment via economic activities or ill-treated rubbish. If such detrimental damages are still made, we’ll have to suffer from exceeding extreme natural phenomenon. To illustrate, statistics indicate that the world has discarded 6. 7 trillion wastes and a warning number of 79 percent of them are disposed straightforwardly into the ocean. To make it worse, the average temperature has risen 0. 6 in 20th century and environmentalists speculate that the temperature of surface of the earth can increase by an amount of 1. 1 to 6. 4. This follow horrendous consequences, rising sea water level, to name a few. Numerous islands are drowned in water, how many more are we wanting if we still stick to resigning ourselves to climate change.
On the other hand, fighting against climate changes can guarantee a propitious life not only for us but also our off-springs given that it’s considerably likely for these harsh situations can be reversed if we take the initiatives to combat our-own-made-monsters. The apotheosis is summit about climate change when developed countries committed to curtail their green house gas emission and reach neural before 2060. Moreover, strategies aiming at clean and sustainable corporations can also be remunerative and crucial to building a well-being society. In a report, these can save material and fuels in factories, thus increase worldwide GDP from 1. 8 to 2. 6 million trillion dollar. Massive conglomerates such as Starbucks frequently advertise their environmental policies to cater to concern about eco-friendliness of consumers. This has only happened in light of the fact that individuals have demanded these reforms.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we have to take actions to fight climate change rather than embrace it due to economic, social and health benefits it offers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30213903743 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17144874827 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.4542950939 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151644676658 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308934966178 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561344337203 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994387563211 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674854674393 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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