The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table represents the consumption of dairy products of four age rackets in a European country over a course of a week.
Apparently, the youngest groups consume the least regarding milk and butter amount despite possessing the highest fat content. The 65+ people drink the most milk, mainly low fat meanwhile the 45-65 subgroup eat more butter than the other three with an equivalence between full and low fat consumers.
Obviously, as age ascends, the amount of milk increased: 1200 for under 25 brackets, 1650, 1670 and 1900 respectively for 26-45; 45-65 and 65+ agglomeration. On the contrary, the fat content is lower for the older at 20 for 26-24; 45 for 45-65 and 30 for over 65 people.
In terms of butter, younger people also use the least at merely 12g, in contrast to 19g for those 26-45, and 60g and 30g for the two older groups in turn. Drawing a parallel of full fat shoppers, we can see no discrepancy with the first place pertinent to under 25 group(60%), followed by 45-65 counterpart (50%), the 65+ ranked third with 49%, and the 25-45’s proportion is only 38%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, regarding, so, third, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75661375661 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5862897146 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.42492979 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 4.34317383033 339% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773416183251 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600386241438 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10912193305 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095487207619 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133327533153 0.0580467560999 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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