The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture represents the procedure pf recycling wasted glass bottles.
Apparently, used glass jar go through a three-step-process before delivered to supermarket.
Stage one starts with thrown away jug are gathered in collection point, then transported. After that, they are washed in high-pressure water to get rid of dirt. When this steps finished, clean bottles then categorized into three subgroups, which is clear, green and brown. All groups will be transferred to glass factory, where they will culminate in pieces. Then comes the deliquescent via burned in furnace in a temperature ranging between 600 and 800 Celsius. This follows by mixing between recycled liquid glass and new liquid glass to create a mixture then poured in a mold to reconstruct the original shape of bottles.
Freshly-made jar enter stage three, when they will be bottled by companies like coca cola and finally are placed in supermarket’s shelves, ready for sale.
- Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it Discuss both views and give your own opinion 65
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- the diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chains in the center of the Pacific ocean write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown 61
- Students perform better in school when they are rewared rather than punished To what extent do you agree Discuss both view and give your own opinion 89
- The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week in kilometers in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38666666667 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02202286924 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6278514549 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129444624628 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054136124915 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619049178629 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953118973651 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669437119006 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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