Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A number of people argue that popular events like World Cup or international sports competitions not only significantly reduce tensions among countries but also manifest patriotism. From my own perspective, I partly agree with this notion.
On the one hand, excessive competitiveness between two nations during a sporting occasion can considerably exacerbate the current conflicts. Apparently enough, if two countries which are expressing acrimony towards each other, compete in a crucial match, the patriotic emotion can run extremely high to the extent that even the smallest indiscriminate actions can instigate unwarranted violation among extreme advocates and plunge participants into the collision course. The apotheosis was the 1970 FIFA World Cup qualifier between Honduras and El Salvador which resulted in rioting and consequently a war between two countries.
On the other hand, via sporting tournaments of worldwide level, citizens can represent their patriotism. It is sufficiently obvious that, such international events will be the golden opportunities for the hosting country to exhibit their beauty, culture and talents to the world, which can be achieved by the solidarity of the inhabitants. Furthermore, that any country successfully held a sporting event can have an everlasting effect and is a metaphor for the combined effort to spread nation’s images. This will definitely the pride of offspring generations. For instances, the first sea game hold by Vietnam in 2003, not only did Vietnam rank first in terms of total medals but also succeed in evincing the culture of Vietnam by applying familiar objects into the design of symbols.
In conclusion, though the actions of hooligans in international competition can aggravate conflicts among nations, it is undeniable that these events can enhance patriotic emotions. Authority should therefore curb these unwholesome activities as when it comes to sports, it needs to only boil down to sportsmanship and superb performances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65562913907 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15149691575 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652317880795 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8394352898 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190635082414 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663053578839 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574888558007 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122966166895 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797979111715 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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