Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often held that humans recently do not concern to keep their classic traditions of their home country. While others thought that it is very significant to stick in our legacy. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favor of the latter.
On one hand, a branch of people sticks to their blood, family, and their ancestors. Consequently, they do celebrate every traditional occasion. In addition to, they had their own kinds of food.
For instance here in Egypt the 10th of Dhul-hijjah all Muslims eats Fattah since, in this very day it’s
Eid al-Adha which is an Islamic feast. Furthermore, in Nuba which is a city located in the south part of Egypt. The people were and still very proud of their history and therefore directors tend to capture and film their civilization on documentary movies.
On the other hand, many people enjoy that they are living in the 21st century and the whole world became a small village. There are several explanations, teenagers now days have on their cell phones like a dozen types of music from all over the world. Moreover, they do eat extremely vary types of recipes daily. Wear varied brands of clothes, though. Due to the modern civilization we all now live in
And that rapid vehicles, technology, and applications, we all became familiar versions of each other’s.
Like copies of a computer’s printer.
My own opinion is that the truth in both views. Definitely a huge number of people like to live like their parents and grandparents, while others, and I am one of them can’t live without watching out what’s going on in the entire universe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...assic traditions of their home country. While others thought that it is very signific...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83571428571 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59149905401 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6282556785 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185285597993 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524865363387 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040893052389 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700255007722 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512601697868 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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