Some believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. Do you think school should require students to learn a foreign language?
The need for linguistic skills are of paramount importance in todays' society.However,a majority of people is of the opinion that learning new foreign languages should not be mandatory for students who possess no special aptitudes in this area.Personally, i think that acquiring new languages should still be demanded at schools regardless of the pupils' academic achievements.
Regarding the latter viewpoint,anything is possible if we have great determination and commitments.Although some children may find it difficult to understanding different languages,memorizing new worlds or even suffer from diseases related to hearing and speaking,it is by no means clear that we are allowed to let them desist from learning foreign languages as it will immensely affect their job career prospects and their futures as a whole.Instead,we should take great care of each students by motivating them and make their progresses more easily seen with an effective teaching style.For instance,at the school where I studied,all the English teachers incorporated many teaching methods into their lessons such as including quizzes and games and have their students record their daily achievements,which made the lessons considerably more compelling and helped the pupils to progressed well.
Additionally,with the rapid development of technology,the process of learning new languages can thankfully be more easier as the students can solve most of their problems through browsing the internet.However,some internet sources can be may be unreliable or even misleading and it is the role of teachers and parents generally to ensure that the use of the internet remains a guided learning process.
To conclude,i feel that learning foreign languages,with their wide uses in the economy,should remain an integral part of the curriculum for all students and that teachers must do their best to assist their students,especially ones with lower abilities.w
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77430555556 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72897753245 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.888567241 49.4020404114 498% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 415.75 106.682146367 390% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.7667163134 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262511233505 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17133079223 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727496542929 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17133079223 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727496542929 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.7 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.37 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.31 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.