In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem? (Reported 2017, Academic Test)
It is thought by some that in a few urban areas around the world traffic congestion is a concerning issue. As cities are growing around the world, people have to buy cars in order to get to their destination but this can be solved by developing public transport system and introducing new laws.
The main problem of traffic congestion in urban areas is that cities and towns are growing. These is because the population around the world is growing. When people live in big urban areas they have to travel for big distances in order to get to their destinations as a result people are tend to buy their own cars. Another point to consider is that car’s manufacturers sell their cars for reasonable price on offer different additional option for free. Further more people can afford to have three or four cars for small family. In addition, cars is the most convenient means of transportation around the city.
One effective solution is to develop existent public transport and create additional means of public transportation. For example, additional routes of public buses in rush hours will be beneficial for citizens and building lines for high-speed trains as them offer people travels to big distances for short period and also it is very comfortable. Another possible solution is introducing new laws to people who drive their own cars. For instance, China and Singapore has strict laws, In China, Beijing citizens can drive their cars only 4 working days a week and Singaporeans pay huge tax for buying own cars.
In conclusion, although people buy more and more cars in order to travel to their destination this development can be talked by improving transport system in cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[4]
Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...s is that cities and towns are growing. These is because the population around the wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95087719298 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71597079951 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.757637456 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106032164668 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478754793865 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592359536973 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866610145308 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555869589563 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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