Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary society, it is argued that prohibiting personal vehicle of each individuals in some cities will be able to beneficial to the modernize city and alleviate polluted emissions. However, using of public conveyance such as buses, taxis, and metros can be better methods to workers or pupils. This essay will elaborated on the opposing perspectives and the reason why I am favor of the former view.
On the one hand, the utilization of community transference offer many profits and expediency in human activities daily. First of all, using of public vehicles in the conurbation will to assuage traffic jams and air contamination. For instance, according to figure of experts in Japan, the government of this country should be given a huge amount of money accounting to 5000 dollars to buy public conveyance like buses, subways, and taxis to service or meet the need of the local people in their daily life. Next, reduce the consumption of natural materials such as gas, petrol , and gasolene when plentiful inhabitants not using private vehicles, but also it can help people that obtained wealthy individuals by decreasing the utilization of natural materials to 25%. Finally, promoting the using of community transportation will leading to advantage in order to pupils have a different circumstances because they are not sufficient many person transportation seem cost an arm and a leg for them. As a result, three elements in above paragraph will help people have a realistic view of it and learn how to spend wisely.
On the other hand, as private vehicles are prohibited on certain days, it can cause inadequate for citizens. More specifically, employees work in the city or center will lead to burdensome because they do not have a plethora of private vehicles and waste of money using community transference, but also it can be detrimental to workers or even leading to harm about respiratory issues when simultaneously fostering a propensity for residents in the largest city due to using of public vehicles limited exceed.
In conclusion, each point of has it own merits. However, I am of the opinion that people should utilize the public transportation to gather service human activities in their life and bring benefits or profits of the inhabitants. It is advisable the people should refer to their using private vehicles to detrimental than beneficial of society conveyance how elaborate their modern vehicles universal in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99248120295 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531328320802 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1212485257 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.214285714 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186377167678 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557793976738 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048196799835 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115435026027 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357031144385 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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