In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes are replacing cars. Why is this the case? Which development do you think is better?
In some places, Cars are more preferable than bicycles. Yet in the other places, bicycles are used more popular than cars. Because of the different priorities of people in different places is the obvious reason. Each case has pros and cons and in my opinion, the development of using bicycles is better in many ways and should be encouraged.
In the places, where people care about their health and have perspective about protecting environment, bicycles are more preferable to use. Moreover, the governments also issue laws to limit the use of automobiles while organize or sponsor for bicycle races to encourage the habit of using bicycles. In the other hand, in the places where people prefer the convenience or have a requirement for the fast speed of transportations and eager to show up their wealth, the cars usage is dominant.
As a person who encourage the healthy life, I have my own reasons for the view that using bicycles is better. First, riding bicycles is useful as doing exercises and it helps to improve people’s health. Second, riding bicycles doesn’t emit CO2 therefor it causes no harm to the environment.
In conclusion, there are some reasonable reasons of the difference in choosing the transportations, here are cars and bicycles, in different places. As using bicycles is a good choice for people health and also the environment, I encourage the development of this habit.
- Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport? 61
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- IELTES Writing Task 1.1 11
- IELTS Writing task 1.0 11
- Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion.Discuss both views and give your opinions. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cycles are used more popular than cars. Because of the different priorities of people i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0686695279 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93690833463 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8722267045 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165321450104 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693159388467 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351938558517 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112844373247 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363697306352 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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