In some cities there are a few control over the design and construction of homes and other building and owner can decide on the design of the house do the advantage of this outweigh the drawbacks.
It is ubiquitously known that the building constructions and infrastructure are essential part of every society. The style of building construction has under the sea changes ever since modernization to place. A section of urban society considered utmost beautiful building designing by owner without the interference of local bodies. This essay shall elucidate the merits and the demerits in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, building constructions by the authorised person has various advantages.By attractive design of building and infrastructure. It can provide the unique look of city.which will helpful to attract the visitors. To be more precise, Government can boost the economy by collecting the revenue from visitor. For example, In Agra which is a famous place in India has Taj Mahal which is the seventh most beautiful building in all over the world made by white marble hass a great source of income. Owing to its attraction and attractive infrastructure owner own style can provide the surplus amount of money to nation. Moreover, every family has a unique need.which they can fulfill to built the building.To be more precise,their own style building also helpful improve their living standard where they can live and enjoy their life. This is significantly improve the people health, lifestyle and peace of mind. In many villas the people made imaginary design of building which give them relaxation and they can fulfill their dream house wish. Not only this but also so it will be helpful to give posh area look in society.Hence, it is is very helpful to gave the division in society in different segments.Futhermore, it is a great motivation for architecture. To illustrate, the own style of building motivate the architectures to improve their ability and helpful to give them employment. Thus, owner on style building design is beneficial for society as well as mankind.
However, there are some negative influence on the society by ower design firstly, it might be create insecurity for other people, might be ignore safety and quality. Byy this I mean, sometime extra large building the great hazard situation for airline. To example, one report of 1899 shown the evidence the reason of clash of plane was extra tall building infrastructure when the pilot lost control to save the building as well as pessenger. Everytime authorities might be not careful about all aspects. Secondly,this type of infrastructure might be create division in society rich can build more beautiful, royal look and advanced technical house which might be the other can't do the same. This type of division create dominance and egoistic behaviour in society. Resultly, urban buildings construction should be on micro base. It should be done by Government to maintain equality and safety in society.
To recapitulate,after discussing negative and positive aspect of owner choice building design and infrastructure although, I velehmely voch that there are a more positive aspect which is beneficial for mankind and the holistic growth of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2564.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28659793814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04824703218 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498969072165 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7226513111 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2083333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242362957492 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697137447702 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460297208233 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145912413181 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329361871035 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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