In some countries and cultures old is people are highly valued wind in other cultures young is more valued discuss both views and give your own opinion
In few countries is to people are more valuable than youngsters however in other countries youngsters are most prominent I believe both are indispensable for the society I will discuss both point of view in the upcoming paragraphs .
On the one hand older generation have huge experience and they are prominent of spiritual growth in the society old persons is more experienced than young girls which is useful for society and child growth new generation . New generation can learn something new when they respect their elder people . Moreover, elder people spend their whole life to grow up their children so child has responsibility to take care and respect their grandparents. For example, in India youngsters always respect their parents,and grandparents,because they know elders are prominent for their spiritual growth ,and their culture are not allowed to disrespect their grandparents.
On the other hand, young people are more energetic and they are nation builders. youngsters have great cognitive power with more physical strength. They play a role to develop their country because they can learn everything very fastly, and they have ability to involve in any work such as, military police sports and other fields. To illustrates, Kuwait,Dubai,and other countries always prefer to invite foreign as youngsters,because in their country have more work related to physical strength. In my opinion ,both generations are good for nation culture aged people are more wise than young adults. Consequently, they can easily solve any conflicts in the society and the nation.
In Conclusion, both generation play equal role to growth in the society. Elders are not useless,due to this their life experience,and wisdom. while, youngsters are more productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46715328467 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05451005399 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4790742831 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177504064634 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715076668002 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071606644502 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121328562238 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700669215463 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.