No doubt, good health is believed to have an immense significance in the life of humans; however, the escalation of average weight, as well as a decrease in health and fitness, has become a big concern among modern people. Further, the reasons and solutions are yet to be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are certain reasons that can be considered behind the escalating rate of weight among the people. Firstly, the fast-food seems to be the foremost cause of this issue as people prefer to eat this food instead of homemade food in their daily routine, it is incontrovertible that most of the fast-food items contain excessive sugar and fat, which increase the weight of the body. Secondly, the sedentary lifestyle also links with this problem because people have to work for a long time; therefore, they do not have time to do exercise, and thus, it leads to health issues especially obesity.
The appropriate measures need to be implemented for solving this issue, the first and foremost is diet, so people should avoid the fast food, since it contains a high cholesterol ingredients, which are noxious for their health; hence, they must add the green vegetables and fruits in their daily diet in order to fulfill the value of high nutritious vitamins and minerals . Besides this, people have to adopt the habit of doing the exercises in order to burn their calories, which helps to make them fit and active.
In conclusion, though increasing weight is not a big issue in this busy world, yet people should be aware of their health; consequently, they should manage their diet and exercise properly for tackling this problem.
- Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree? 67
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- Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge You should write at least 250 words 56
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of high nutritious vitamins and minerals . Besides this, people have to adopt the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94584837545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63429229307 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1561115295 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.25 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.125 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219627031344 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939355316077 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346131317279 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134049989136 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258055542972 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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