In this modern era , the ratio of flora and fauna is declining consecutively in each passing day and the wildlife as well as plants are being destroyed in the different parts of the world due to various purposes. This essay will analyze the divergent causes of this deterioration and some appropriate steps which can be taken to tackle this problem.
To begin with, growing number of population is the main reason of this falling trend. Therefore , trees are chopped for making a farmlands to grow crops for the fulfillment of food needs in the life of people as well as the more land is obligatory for masses to live and they need a space to built their own houses . However, the establishment of factories and industries becomes a main reason for the extinction of animals because the industries chemical waste is thrown in seas and rivers and this toxic water spoils the life of animals.
Further more, there are different kind of modes which can be used to solve this problem. Firstly, government should make some strict policies for controlling the population density because it has a huge negative impact due to the high requirement of land for accommodation purpose. Moreover, the other alternative methods should be implemented by government for the depletion of industries chemical waste rather than mixing in seas and rivers.
In conclusion, every individual person is capable to handle this downfall of plants and animals and the government is highly authorized to take some actions for the preservation of ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04508196721 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82051734046 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5209146488 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.777777778 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120375469132 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516814584331 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382637288719 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801000907181 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330080116893 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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