In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In terms of communication, the image, whether it is via photography or film, is considered to be getting more popularity than writing among modern people. In my opinion, I fully agree with this choice of people as this trend seems to be more advantageous as compared with the written method.
To initiate the merits of the image. The first and foremost benefit is understanding among illiterate ones. To elaborate, in today’s world, people who are uneducated and cannot understand any written situation are likely to grasp easily through photographs. To cite an example, the printed pictures in the newspapers regarding social issues such as poverty, inflation, corruption, and illiteracy become helpful to understand those people about these issues who are illiterate. Another advantage is time-saving. A person who is working as a businessman in any sector is likely to give knowledge by only showing photographs about products rather than presenting in the written form as it might be lengthy and consumes much time.
Easy to save memories can also be considered one of the prominent merit. To explain, while using cell phones, it becomes easy for people to catch their memories on some special occasions such as birthday parties, family tours, and marriages that can be helpful for them to keep for a long time by adding in frames, making short films as well.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, taking photographs seems to have more benefits for making illiterate people understand, and abolish the wastage of time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21774193548 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88457269373 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4390593285 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129431582794 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419543671489 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401702404483 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764300951061 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411565731413 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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