In today's world communication is an important part of life, and the way we communicate is changing rapidly. It is no doubt that visual forms of presenting information are going to be the effective way when compared to writing words. I completely agree with this point for a wide variety of reasons. I will explain the details further in my essay.
To begin with, people forms a better impression by looking at images or videos. It helps them to understand better about the subject such as products and news. Thus, they can form the right opinion and conclusion about these things. For instance, while buying electronic items online such as television, consumers like to see how it looks and works by looking at photos and demonstration videos available on the website. Although this information is available in written form on the same website. The majority of us do not read this data as we can access these details by watching different films uploaded by sellers on online sites. Hence, it helps inform an opinion.
Secondly, photos or films help us avoid misunderstanding. It is easy for people to follow maps with real-time video than just following text directions. For example, we all use google maps or any other navigation maps in our daily commute. We always use them in satellite image or street photo mode but not the written directions. We do this to avoid confusion or misunderstanding in reading the directions. Lastly, illiterate people can learn things using visual information. As they do not know how to read and write, photographs and films help them to learn about many things in their life.
Overall, I agree that the visualization method of communicating is gaining popularity due to reasons like easy to understand, no misconceptions and no prior knowledge is required during interactions. I also believe, at present, it is the best way available to us than using words. However, I suggest that both forms of communication should be available depending upon the purpose.
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned 78
- Some people say that no one should do the same job forever while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society Discuss both views and give your opinion 11
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
- You have recently moved to a new apartment Write a letter to your friend and explain why did you move Describe the new apartment Invite him her to visit 73
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school Others however believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ration videos available on the website. Although this information is available in writte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99700598802 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9499284534 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0031177923 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4761904762 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140572530407 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038585216665 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368855496303 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863260367906 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257616319464 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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