In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
It is true that people have been facing the problem of overweight and they concerning about their level of fitness and health condition because in some countries these problems are very debatable in the present time. This essay shall explain the reasons why this is happening and some steps that can be helpful to resolve these obstacles of human life.
To begin with, there are many reasons beyond this occurance. The first and the foremost is changes in eating habits. This is because there are numerous types of food available with many kinds of ingredients and convenient to prepare. Thus, people think that this is very fast and tasty but they have never think about it’s disadvantages. Those types of food contain high calories and cholesterol that means high level of fat and much chances of acidity which will be the cause of obesity. Furthermore, less physical activity and less laboring work due to improvement in technology. Since computers and machinery have come in the workplace, Physical work and outdoor game has decreased day by day. Today, mostly works based on computers and youngsters spent their leisure time on social media and computer games instead of outdoor activities. Therefore, the average weight of people and the health problems are brewing especially diabetics problem.
As every problem has a solution, there are number of steps that can save people from this problems. If people want to defeat the obesity and stay healthy in their life, they have to avoid junk food firstly and accept hygienic food that will improve their immunity and give enough protein instead of fat and cholesterol. In addition to it, They can prevent them from these problems by exercising or Yoga, because by exercising and yoga blood circulation of human body will be maintain and people can get strength from exercise, it can help them to maintain their fitness level and they can prevent them form many disease such as cancer and heart attack (It is scientifically proved by World health Organization).
To conclude, increasing weight, decreasing level of fitness and health condition. These all problems are depends on Human life how they live in their life because there are also many solutions to defeat these obstacles in people’s life.
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- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: thought
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07506702413 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51402208685 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530831099196 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7053196661 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285149831225 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905118541139 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124235817235 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185438616704 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617599043619 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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