In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
There is no gainsaying the fact that many a person nowadays is focusing more towards their work and income rather than fitness. This in-turn is leading to an average weight gain for many individuals. There are many causes for said problems; however, the major ones being, excessive intake of convenience food and professions that require a person to stay at a desk for longer hours. It is the need of the hour that these problems be tackled in an efficient manner.
To initiate with the causes for weight gain furthering to decreasing health and fitness. Primarily, people nowadays due to their busy lives tend to purchase convenience food instead of sparing time for home cooked meals. To be precise, the more people eat junk food with minimal nutritional values, the more they ought to have medical ailments. For example, according to a survey conducted by Food Development Agencies in 2015, the people who consumed food from outlet stores had 33% higher chances of acquiring diabetes and hypertension as compared to their counterparts.
Second to this is the fact that more number of jobs nowadays require people to sit in a chair and perform strenuous tasks for hours together. This is rendering them tired and not allowing them to spend time outdoors, which is decreasing their fitness . Therefore, it is necessary to take actions on an individual level as this trend cannot be abolished over-night.
Having said that about the problems leading to health hazards. The solutions are, first and foremost, people who are tied up in their lives with work should cater some time towards cooking for themselves or order in nutritious food. This is because, should they consider healthy alternatives, they can remain astray from diseases. Cure fit an Indian conglomerate for instance, provides food with micronutrients that can keep a person healthy and also delivers food at one's convenience. Moreover, people who find it difficult to stay active and wander the nature because their work profile does not allow them to do so, had better use technology for their benefit. For example, there are many applications in current day that remind you to stretch your legs and keep fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05817174515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63947349004 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570637119114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7695199168 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176656836729 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062004585636 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417479654736 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109502518342 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132305336708 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.