In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some nations, people are getting heavier and standard of living and well-being falling. In the upcoming paragraphs i will discuss principal cause and there is number number of solution which could be implemented to deal with unhealthy living style.
To begin with, health crisis are increased due to over-consumption of poor quality sustenance. There are easily available convenience food and junk food such as microwaves dinners, chocolate bar, McDonald's and pizza, have become a ubiquitous part of modern life. For example, the movie "Super Size Me" demonstrated that person who eats this kind of food all the time they could be suffered from over weight and it's cause of blood pressure and heart storks.
Further, most practical solution to this problem is a government sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign can aware the people of dangerous impact of fast food. In this way people can avoid that type of food and try to eat healthy food. For instance, recently the UK government lobbied their citizens to eat 5 pieces of fruits and vegetables per day and it's have positive impact of citizens health. In this way in UK dramatic decreased overweight and illness.
In conclusion, fast food have more drastic effects on human body and this problem can curtail by government awareness campaign.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24186046512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76906342956 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0339838708 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.454545455 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113875162497 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425265433117 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304518706286 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666478557333 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317084853503 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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