In today's modern world, the health is a enormous issue of the globe.The number of people who become overweight has increased and their health and fitness have declined day-by-day. In this essay, I will discuss some cause of health problem and how solve these problems and come to the conclusion.
At the outset, every youth prefer to consume the fast food which contain highly fat and sugar, pizza, burger, etc. As a result, those people consume these food frequently has become a overweight. For example, some peoples who workor study out of our town, they mainly consume fast food because it is good in taste and consumed time as well. The other reason of increasing weight is that people have no time to do some exercises and yoga. Around the globe,every person have busy in their life due to work or business. They have wake up in the early morning and arived home at late night. Therefore, the have no time to do some exercises. Moreover, many of these people have some serious health problems such as obesity and diabetes.
There are several things to solve the overweight problem. Firstly, every person should make their diet plan. They avoid fast food which contain large amount of bad calories. They prefer to consume hygienic food such as wheat, green vegetables, oats,and fruits etc. The other thing is that people should burn their calories by exercises. One of the way by changing the mode of transportation.For example, people should go their by drive a car and it changed by riding a bicycle. It is not just body healthier, but bike riding also reduce air pollution as well.
In conclusion , people should consume the less amount of fast food,and at their free time do some exercises and yoga.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82033898305 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43804719842 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3606507649 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205996005706 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702013237202 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638171301518 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140613075134 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611965167532 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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