Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
In some countries so many parents encourage their children from young age to have a job they believe that starting form young age it will help them to coup with adulthood, but some believe that young adult shouldn’t work they have to put all of their time and effort in education and founding their interest therefore they could found a better job in the future. This essay will discuss this opposing points of views.
For centuries majority of parents always encouraged their children to found a job and work from young age so they could help their families but as the centuries pass that age that they send their children to work has become higher. Now days parent only encourage their children to work only to help the become prepared for the time that they become adult and enter the work force as a result their children become more independent and grow up faster and independent consequently can move out of their parents house easier .
However, working since teenage years can have some draws backs, because the society is developing and so many jobs need special skills. as a result are children need to learn those skills so they could obtain a good job for their future. Therefore, learning this skill need time so they need to concentrate all of their time for learning so they don’t have time for going to part-time job.
To conclude in the modern society and all the developing technology the young adult need to put all of their energy for gaining as much as knowledge as they can as fast as they can. Because the competition is fierce for founding a good job so working in part time job is not a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66551724138 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35344264188 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441379310345 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4192123157 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.333333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148386536368 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823846110937 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611270072444 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109193780134 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444052782871 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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