We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
Now a days technology is a indispensable part of every human life . It is agreed that the technology have many benefits for every day task life. to illustrate this, the effect of usage of modern technology in our life will be discussed.
Firstly one of the most beneficial aspect of the modern technology is the internet, using the internet allows people ta have a vast amount of data and informations at their fingertips .whatever, equations they have they can search for it on the internet and have their answers .also internet allows many people to interact with each others from all over the world .contacting with people has become extremely easy .
On the other hand one of the draw backs of internet is that people don’t have to rely on their own memories anymore and if you take away their smartphone and internet they couldn’t do a very good job of navigating their daily life or remembering vital information .also people do not put much that effort to go out and make friend and have a physical contact they prefer to stay at home and use their computer to connect with other people this kind of behaviour can destroy a person social life and have a negative side effect on their mental health.
In conclusion modern technology is improving every day humans life quality but relying too much on technology it can have negative side effect on person life and make a person not self sufficient enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days technology is a indispensable part of e...
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Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
Now a days technology is a indispensable part of e...
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Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a indispensable part of every human life . It is agreed that the technology have m...
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Message: Did you mean 'for everyday'?
Suggestion: for everyday
... that the technology have many benefits for every day task life. to illustrate this, the effe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ta) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Suggestion: .
...ata and informations at their fingertips .whatever, equations they have they can s...
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Suggestion: .
...t on the internet and have their answers .also internet allows many people to inte...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...with each others from all over the world .contacting with people has become extrem...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng with people has become extremely easy . On the other hand one of the draw bac...
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Suggestion: .
...ly life or remembering vital information .also people do not put much that effort ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75708502024 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59037701188 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.542361877 49.4020404114 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.833333333 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1666666667 20.7667163134 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982132804812 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532972868187 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031830602521 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652235587315 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343164610929 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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