Some countries have a law to limit working hours for employees. Why? Do positive or negative development.
Laws are made by Government for the smooth running of the society. Without laws we would be living in utter chaos. It is debatable that many countries have a law to limit working hours for employees. I will discuss about it in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are myriad reasons that Government should make law against over working hours. First and foremost is every person have their own life because people who working over hours they forget their personal life. As a result they do not give enough time to their family. Secondly is many people always stuck in their work due to this they get mentally upset and always ignore their own desires. Consequently, they face any dangerous diseases such as which are related to their brain. For instance, it is normally possible that if people mostly give more preference to their work then they become mentally upset. Due to 2012, there are million people who face dangerous diseases because they gave most time of their life to work. As a result, they faced brain problems like they become mental.
Moreover, employees should put steps against over working hours due to this they do not give their contribution in development of society. As a result, they limit their thinkings around the work. Meanwhile, there are alot of employees who have a curiosity to do their work with fruitless behavior and honesty but they become lazy and lethargic after facing difficulties in their job. Hence, time by time they become reduce their honestly and politeness.
In epilogue, although, work is very essential for development and basic needs of life but it is compulsory that every kind of work should be in limit working hours because there are so many things are important which are necessary for almost every person's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, honestly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95681063123 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41132396908 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508305647841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2473499511 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215930818798 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902447490539 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117896571187 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180015808574 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913904932208 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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