In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s era, there is an increasing trend of eating much fast food. Most of the folks are suffering from different health problems due to excessive consumption of fast food. From my point of view, I would strongly agree with the governments to implement higher tax on fast food. This essay will examine the reasons to my statement.
On one hand, nowadays, people are too busy in their works and have less time for cooking foods. so, they tend to buy fast foods. This is the reason why people nowadays suffer from different health problems such as Obesity. Similarly, people have gained the wei...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s and have less time for cooking foods. so, they tend to buy fast foods. This is t...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...food consumption. On the other hand, several health problem such as respiratory problem, he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 965.302439024 175% => OK
No of words: 342.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95029239766 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55019209142 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479532163743 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 283.868780488 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2550100227 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.619047619 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360027562903 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121751103198 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603834127875 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252241411702 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561763400519 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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