In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
The number of people who have health issues because of junk food is increasing in some nations, so people think that imposing a higher tax on this kind of food is especially vital. Personally, i completely agree with this point of view.
Nowadays, the main reason for people’s unhealthy problems is having lots of fast food. The food that you can easily buy and not take much time to cook contains higher quantities of fat and carbohydrate than our health needs. Recently, people tend to have several diseases related to fast food such as diabetes, heart disease,... Moreover, buying food at a convenient store is challenging for us to identify whether the food is clean or dirty. Some food stalls choose low-quality ingredients to make food because of the profit and people can not find out immediately.
Although there are several ways to reduce eating junk food habit, one of the most useful ways is that the government should impose a higher tax on fast food. Some people, especially low-income families are attracted by fast food just because of the convenient and cheap reasons. If the price of this kind of food gets higher and much more costly, there would be a significant decrease in the number of people buying fast food. Food stores might not waste time and money on selling junk food. Customers would turn to buy safe, clean, natural food in order to protect their health and put off buying fast food.
In conclusion, we all know that eating junk food brings a lot of diseases for our health, and imposing higher tax on junk food is great way to reduce this habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...food is great way to reduce this habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74637681159 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43940156682 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5341322704 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460817479952 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182295632621 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900545514544 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312689035225 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450965699814 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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