In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Some people eat too much fast food, consequently it leads to different kind of illness in some countries. Nowadays, this countries such as Britain, USA and Malaysia are growing about to eat too more fast food by most people. Because some people think fast foods are cheaper and comfortable to eat than other fresh green foods. This kind of nutrition save people's time. Therefore, they always eat this type of food. Moreover, these foods are to prepare very easy.
However, people do not think consequence and their health. Hence, various type of illness, especially fatness. This is global problem in the worldwide. Besides there are various heavy diseases for example, blood flow, heart problems, diabetes mellitus and so on. Some people think their budget to buy eating consequently they compel to buy fast food. But when they become ill, they may be spend more than buying fast food. They should spend their money buying healthy foods instead that. Government should to impose the tax different kind of ways. For instance, someone eat too much fast food, government should be take half of their salary per person of family when they may be work somewhere. Besides, some nutrition cafes should organize different type of healthy foods or drinking such as for to be health cocktail, green salads and so on. Accordingly people will learn healthy life.
On the other hand, there are a lot of advantages of this kind of food too. The first one is that fast food is really helpful when we hurry up or late to go somewhere and we need a quick meal. The second one is that it is very taste and too many people prefer to eat fast food. The third one is that burgers are more available and appropriate in cost for students, pupils.
In my opinion, every people should take care their lifestyle. Some people might be hate from the government for imposing taxes. This is their task. So they think our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, third, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80303030303 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29236165269 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3621652403 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.24 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416002870204 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122097767411 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795994829607 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26353031388 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778895503352 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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