In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at 4 years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are 7 or 8.
How far do you agree with either of these views?
In this day and age, people are concerned about whether children should start being educated at the age of four or wait until they reach the age of seven to eight. Although many people lament that their kids have to go to school in the early age, I avocate the idea that school is just suitable for the latter group.
On the one hand, there are many compelling reasons not to let children under the age of 4 have access to formal education. A scientific fact discovered regarding to stages of cognitive development is that learners at this age group are just at the preoperational stage; therefore, they do not have the ability to regconise either languages or abstract things. In this period, it is better to free them to grow up naturally, let them do what they like rather than force them to school where is not suitable.
In opposition, the next four years see a sea change in the development of cognition when children reach the concrete operational stage. In this phase, they are more logical and can use methodical manupilation of symbols. They are also less egocentric and more aware of the outside world and events; hence, it is much easier for teachers to properly guide them to obtain knowledge. In comparison to those in the earlier stage, younglings in the age of seven to eight can regconise the importance of study, so that they are able to set a serious attitude towards learning. This scientifically proves that formal education can be much more effective to be adopted for 7 years or so students.
In conclusion, as aforementioned sound reasoning, I firmly assert that school is just appropriate for the concreted operational children, not for underdeveloped young kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7560137457 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71244408036 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 291.0 20.2975951904 1434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1384.0 106.682146367 1297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 291.0 20.7667163134 1401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 56.0 7.06120827912 793% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208901637283 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208901637283 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119672451208 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573871968881 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.5 13.0946893788 1119% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -215.43 50.2224549098 -429% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 115.6 11.3001002004 1023% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.54 8.58950901804 251% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 118.4 10.1190380762 1170% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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