In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There has been a rising in the number of adults staying with their parents even after graduating and having a full-time job. Although there are certain benefits of living with family, I believe that the disadvantages involved are more significant.
On the one hand, there are some significant merits if the grownups do not move out. Firstly, it is undoubted that staying under the same roof can be an economical choice. This is because people can save money on expenses that they can split with their parents like rents or grocery bills. Especially for those who do not have a high-paid job, it can reduce the financial burden and enables them to save up for the future. The second advantage could be that living in the parental home can increase the family bond. Many adults are too engaged in making a living that they rarely have the opportunity to have a family gathering. By staying with their parents, people can strengthen the family sentiment easily and take care of their parents more conveniently, which can decrease the rate of abandoned elders.
On the other hand, I believe the drawbacks of this matter prevail over its benefits. First of all, staying in the same house as their parents can deprive people of learning necessary skills. People living in a multigeneration home usually are exempt from doing domestic chores, which means that these capable adults do not know the basic skills like cooking or cleaning that are vital in life when they eventually have to move out because of marriage or parents’ passing away. Secondly, people are more likely to be financially dependent on their parents as they are staying with them. Being able to rely on their guardians acts as a precursor for these adults to have a sedentary lifestyle as they do not have the urge to find a job. Moreover, this can cause financial hardships on the parents as some have to continue working despite the fact that they have passed the retirement age to cover the expenses of their offsprings.
In conclusion, although returning back to the parental home can be conducive in some factors such as financial aspects and familial relationships, this temporary lifestyle will not be helpful for them in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89627659574 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58140303643 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3503895455 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349208136337 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120280913915 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074483335885 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226055505074 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115087807732 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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