In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buying them.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
In the age of rapid globalization, everything is expensive so as house. This is the reason why majority of people receommend to hire a hourse then purchasing it spending a huge sum of money. My essay will give both pros and cons of lending home below.
Saving a huge amount of money and buying a house for ownself is like a dream today for everyone so renting house is a good deal. House is the place where anyone feels safe and felaxed. Either it’s the luxurious villa or a small hut, the warmness of houese can’t be fulfilled by the rented apartment. You will get a enough spece as per your need in the rented house and you also can change it if the house doesn’t meet your requirements at any time. For an example, my uncle and aunt used to stay in a small house before the birth of Niece, however, now they are shifted into the new one insearch of spacious place. And the another positive factor is renting house is that all the mantainance will be done by the landlord so you don’t need to spent money on it.
Talking about the negative aspects of hiring a house is that you need to spend lots of money in a rent. Small family with average income and limited income source are the who either can buy a house nor they can properly pay the installment of the house. Their all lifetime saving will be spended in the rent of house. Spending a life in others accommodation and spending a large sum is the negative aspects of renting house.
To conclude, you need to take care of your income and take the descision which size house to rent otherwise you might get in financial trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4527027027 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43407414568 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6893328211 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19314192029 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697332631031 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403744764311 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106080693174 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464688239931 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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