There is no doubt that numerous vehicles are being used in order to migrate one place to another place while using bicycle as a primary mean of transport has decreased with each passing days although it has many advantages. this essay not only highlight the reasons behind this trend but also offer some potential ways to mitigate this problem.
There are a numerous causes behind losing the popularity of bicycle, first and foremost, people have engrossed their mundane affairs so that they do not have huge time to use bicycle. Another means of transportation takes very fewer time as compared to this, therefore public want to promote time saving means. Moreover, developing countries roads is full of traffic so that separate roads have been needed which can take huge burden on national budget . Furthermore, weather conditions also become hurdle in the accepting way of bicycle. For example, if any person ride a bicycle in hot summer, he/she will sweat which ordure bad smelling, it cannot be acceptable in any office.
People should be encouraged by government to use this pattern, firstly, media, can be play instrumental role in this trend because they can aware the people about the benefits of using bicycles. it leads to healthy lifestyle and help to get rid from many disease. Furthermore, roads must be built in order to enhance the safety purpose. For instance, Denmark widen the roads where can only bicycles ride.
To encapsulate, given aforementioned information it is abundantly clear that although cycling is lose popularity in these days , it can be mitigated by adopting many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11363636364 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63854073765 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662878787879 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0589936577 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298763378033 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084482976986 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770584256741 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159891838467 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762928430328 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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