The past few decades have witnessed an exorable acceleration in possessing a private house for owners would attach more significance to this trend than renting a home. There exists a whole host of justification for this phenomenon and from my perspective, I am inclined to believe that it has been conducive to the inhabitants.
Initially, owning a home could be attributed to a vast array of reasons involving the positive surge in socio-economic background and the emotional appeal of possessing home. With the financial burgeoning growth and tempting deals from estate agency, it is apparent that the affordability of a home would be more viable than ever for the dwellers. Importantly, should people rent a temporary accommodation, they will have to shoulder the burden of fees, the expenditure for renovating facilities, which in the long run is a huge expense. Moreover, the terrific feelings of securing a home has been regarded as remarkable justification in owning a permanent home. Settling down, having a place to call home and procuring an ideal home for the next generation are substantial merits when people obtain their individual home.
I strongly subscribe to the view that purchasing a house has been a positive move in the current time. The aspiring attitude of owning a house would definitely be a strong driving force for youngster who are bound to make great endeavor to reach that target in the long run. On top of that, I am convinced that having freedom is of paramount importance in this trend. Contrary to a rent house where people are not allowed to make changes, in their own house, they completely have a right to renovate or make arrangement whatever they desire. Last but not least, purchasing a property would stand a better chance of improved stability for owners. Building a happy family and long term commitment in lieu of frequently moving to new places is likely to be outstanding perks for people to opt for a living place. According to a recent research in Australia in 2019, people owning a stable property entailed the higher rate of success than other group.
In conclusion, I hold a conviction that owning a steady property do owners a service rather than renting a house for these compelling aforementioned grounds
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: chau phuc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...to opt for a living place. According to a recent research in Australia in 2019, people owning a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00795755968 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95991508544 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3254534871 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.866666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237973937173 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775141120579 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335507542188 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147637558123 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231687876266 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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