In some cultures, owning a house is of vital importance. Hence, some people opt for buying a home instead of renting one. In my opinion, the reason for this depends upon many factors, but it usually is more of an advantage than a negative situation.
Firstly, not owning a property usually results in having to follow some rules that are set by a landlord. That can include having to pay a regular rent, and following a set of regulations. For instance, when you rent an apartment, you probably are not allowed to redecorate it. This particularly is a hurdle for students who are planning of a short-term residence, and want to feel like home in their new place of living.
On the other hand, there are several advantages to owning your house. House ownership gives a sense of security and comfort. Furthermore, the stability of it could mean that one might not need to worry about their salary to pay for the place on a regular basis.
To conclude, although some people might prefer to simply rent a house, this convenience comes at a high cost. In my opinion, the drawbacks of owning a home are outweighed by the advantages and this for many is a potential positive situation.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: chau phuc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
... this depends upon many factors, but it usually is more of an advantage than a negative si...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, so, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65550239234 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69581454092 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.10466203 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269445335304 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897816201877 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711949726201 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16313078534 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069324629279 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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