In several countries residents like owning house moderately than renting home.
I think, own home is good than renting house. Because every month or every week peoples pay to rent money for renting house. And this is a challenge for many. It is better to buy a house than to live a rented house for a long time and for the rent paid during that time. Rent house never has been any one’s own house. And they never sold it. A private home is the personal property of the people. I think that's why most people think it's good to buy a home. Owning houses can be very expensive but now it is possible to get different loans from banks and pay in different ways. Anyone can change or decorate their private home at will.
But rental homes are convenient for people who frequently change jobs. Because they often change jobs and want to move their residences to the workplace as well. And rental housing helps them with that. Rental home is good for students studying abroad. Rental homes are convenient for people who travel to unfamiliar places. And again, they can choose a rental house that is convenient for them or that is convenient for them.
If I want to choose a house, I choose a private house. Because this house will be my personal home. I can change it to my liking. I do not pay a monthly or weekly rent because I live there. I can move there as much as I want. And the main thing there is that if I do not have the money to pay the rent, there will not be a landlord evicting me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ere will not be a landlord evicting me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32624113475 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18020229063 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5798205729 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.0434782609 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2608695652 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.13043478261 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25425681217 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793533046431 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610391736562 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158003881998 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582127816899 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.0946893788 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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