Selecting a place to live in is a big decision to make. In some parts of the world, self-owned home is more necessary rather than rented one. In my opinion, this is a positive situation which can give the people the feeling of safety and enjoyment.
First, let us consider the benefits of it. Undoubtedly, the individuals who has own home feel stability and respect for oneself, because those do not have to do many expenses like paying rent to a landlord. They can spend money more freely. In addition, the decoration of home depends on the people’s will, while the person who has renting home does not have this kind of opportunity. Taking myself as an exsmple when my family and me were living in Tashkent, we can not even move a sofa to another room, so personal accommodation is very important.
Despite the reasons mentioned above, there are some drawbacks of this. Most people live in city apartments with rents and cannot afford to buy a house, however many people have a desire to have their own residence than renting. For this people take bank loans to purchase houses. Then defaulted on their payments and lost a lifetime of investment. Had these same people opted to rent, they would have saved more money and could have . invested in other forms of capital.
To sum up, to live in a place that truly depends on the dwellers has a greater advantage than living in a renting house and gives people freedom and sense of satisfaction.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e their own residence than renting. For this people take bank loans to purchase hous...
^^^^
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld have saved more money and could have . invested in other forms of capital. ...
^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Invested
... have saved more money and could have . invested in other forms of capital. To sum u...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69140625 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5296916579 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5855713781 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246584603455 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730851489894 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676676796135 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148858235419 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578031560502 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e their own residence than renting. For this people take bank loans to purchase hous...
^^^^
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld have saved more money and could have . invested in other forms of capital. ...
^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Invested
... have saved more money and could have . invested in other forms of capital. To sum u...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69140625 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5296916579 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5855713781 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246584603455 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730851489894 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676676796135 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148858235419 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578031560502 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.