With the significant growth of population, people nowadays are more likely to own a house rather than renting one, and in some countries, this is a really hot topic. In my point of view, this can be attributed to many reasons and do wonder for residents in our community.
To begin, there are several motives with regard to the importance of buying a house. Firstly, owning a house will help individuals in their finances in the future. Living in a rental house which you need to pay annually might cost you much while you have lived for a long time. Secondly, spending money on the house is an investment in property. If people buy a house, after the price raised up, they could get advantage of selling it instead of paying a higher rental price.
In some countries, owning a house has become indispensable because of its perks. First and foremost, those who bought a house do not need to pay their rent monthly and will save their money for other essential activities. Moreover, they can build and decorate the house without any restriction. For example, those who live in a rental room, they have difficulties with decorating or enhancement the facilities in their room as they need the acceptance from the owner. This contributes to a more advanced and convenient life.
In conclusion, there are a host of reasons that give rise to buying a house and owning a house has many benefits compared to renting one. Therefore, this should be promoted widely in every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76653696498 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63867170776 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6173673525 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182591581163 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581269815502 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543048311656 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122521241642 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666500024739 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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