People in several nation around the world now consider having a house to be more crucial than renting one. This essay will discuss the behind reasons for this tendency and elaborate on that why it is a positive development.
There are two main reasons why people tend to own a house. Firstly, when anyone poccess a house, which allow they can freedom to build and decorate their house with freestyle. Besides, they will free entry their house without depend on and affect to other private individuals. As a result, this make they feel more comfortable and happy when they come back home after a work-hard day. Secondly, from the home ownership, citizens will reduce their financial burden every month or year. Instead of spending a lot of money on renting a department, they now can create savings account and send it to the bank. This allow people make a clear long-term fiancial plan for their future. For instance, when they are older, they will be have a savings to buy medicine, healthy food and technology equipment such as massage chair, an articificial-respiration.
I extremely believe that this trend generate a positive situation. When people own a house, they must pay a certain amount of taxes, which lead to enhance government budget. From this, the authorities can use this money not only to build more house for homeless and poor children but also improve standard living for citizens. In addition, they can leave ownership of the house to their kids, which facillitate those children earn money to serve own purpose like buy car, jewels, clothes. Therefore them will have a better life to be not worry about rent or build a new house.
In conclusion, rather than using temporarily house, people need to pocess a house which provide a stable lifestyle and ensure their good quality children. I believe that it is a possitive impact on the progress of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... purpose like buy car, jewels, clothes. Therefore them will have a better life to be not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.884375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68367278359 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9897750752 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170831477027 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593146974038 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497410893832 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125900513266 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667840163064 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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