House is a place where there is a feeling of oneness, family and bonding. People own house of various types, some own it while others rent it. In my opinion, owning a house plays a pivotal role than renting one. This essay will describe why is it crucial to own a house rather than taking it on rent.
To begin with, it is not a bad idea to live in rented house, some people rent a house on account of not having enough funds while while some buy it with there own money. Having own house holds a different amount of satisfaction and contentment in life. Own house is having our own property where we don't have to pay monthly rents. Some people like to decorate the house, having a rented house doesn't allows much of decoration as it doesn't belongs to us. For example, research has showed that the people who owned there own houses where very rich and paid the loan and even the house charges. However, having a own house in a city gives us the opportunity of traveling anytime to that place whereas if we have rented a place we have to give back the house at some or the other point of time. Most people have to pay huge deposits for rented house which is frustrating many a times.
The positive aspects of owning a house is you have your own property and you can do whatever you want with that property.
To sum up, to own a house is good thing rather that buying a house on rent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25757575758 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13410583465 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507575757576 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0323833412 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224863338564 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106158602627 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657380317664 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161830230878 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550425833905 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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