In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Some people believe that buying a house is more beneficial than renting one, and there are various reasons to explain this popular conception. Personally, I believe that this is a positive trend among people’s thoughts in our world.
There are two main reasons why owning a house is of importance. Firstly, this is a one-time purchase, so when people have their own home, a sense of security is created. From now they no longer have to think about housing rental fees every month, which is very annoying and also doubles or even triples their monthly living expenses. Secondly, home ownership becomes a trend because people want to live in a house that is exactly the same as their dream one. They have all the authority to build and decorate as they like.
This is an outstanding signal. Another reason is that houses have been seen as a lucrative form of investment, as real estate prices tend to increase in the long run.
In conclusion, the main motivation behind home ownership stems from the desire of having a stable financial base and personal satisfaction. And I also think that this trend has brung us a lot of value in today’s world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52529206232 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4134683529 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4545454545 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23125762079 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896407610538 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672381775351 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130613211872 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072812787969 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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