in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for some people. Why this might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation
In this day and age, house possessing has become a strong mainstream in the society which could be considered as one of the most natural desire of human beings. In my own opinion, this is totally a positive trend.
To begin with, dwellers might easily reach the sense of security when they live in their own house. To explain to this ideal, suppose an unfortunate incident happens, people could minimize the damages to the least level by a variety of solutions such as personal methods or calling for help from local bureaucracy. Another point is that, owning a house is way more beneficial for the owner in term of financial circumstance. Indeed, all excessive charges will be eliminated, which is a plus in the comparison with renting accommodation. In addition, by being landlords, a number of residents can make a massive amount of money by having their accommodations rented out.
On the other hand, besides the safety, the sense of freedom and satisfaction are two different elements captivating individuals to have their own houses. Without being bound by the rule of anyone, people are unrestricted to changed the house the way they want. To illustrate this situation, under no circumstances, are lodgers admissible to modify the layout of the apartment or do anything with it without getting the landlord’s permission. By contrast, staying in personal place offers residents the inner peace, the sense of satisfaction as they can enjoy the vibe to the fullest, decorating or changing the accommodation follow their wishes.
In conclusion, I have to admit that holding a place to live seems to be everyone’s wish. This occurs because they can see the highly potential advantages the service can bring back to them, which are the sense of well beings and financial merits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05743243243 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89741003903 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.409250159 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17891947768 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621832722485 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387968491269 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11015877562 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417245654142 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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