In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Some people argue that it is crucial for people to buy their own houses instead of renting one. There are several reasons why this is the case and I personally believe that the trend is beneficial for both individuals and societies.
One of the most important reasons why people think that owning a house is vital in some nations is that it shows the maturity of a person. Nowadays, buying a home is not easy so when someone can afford their own homes, it means that they can raise their families, take care of their children. For example, some Asian countries like Vietnam, people keep the belief that young people should buy a house to settle down then marry later. In other words, a man who owns his home is mature. Alternatively, people believe that a home is not only a property but also a place to bond relationships between family members. Everyone will be comfortable and happy when they can live their own houses rather than a rented apartment.
I believe that the trend has some advantages for homeowners and other people. In personal perspective, people are motivated to work harder to buy their houses. If people want to settle down and have a family, they will find ways to make more money to afford it and a society with such people will be beneficial. In the societal aspects, when people buy more houses, some services and related fields will develop. The construction sector can be beneficial from the trend and real estate agency can take advantage of this to sell more properties.
In conclusion, people in some countries believe that it is very important to own a house rather than renting one for various reasons and in my opinion, the trend brings many benefits for both individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efits for both individuals and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72425249169 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50148684828 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514950166113 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5289225035 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333116195467 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117168343224 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773231893482 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233649222669 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676495286454 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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