We human beings thriving in this world primarily because of our intelligence. From being cave man to nomadic travellers to settling down in a particular region. The prompt asserts that in some countries, people are opting to buy a home than to rent one and this phenomenon holds significance. In my opinion, there are several reasons behind this and has both merits and demerits.
Firstly, probably in the long run it is costlier to rent than to own a home. For example, in Dhaka the captical city of Bangladesh, the currency is Taka ( in short Tk), a two or three bedroom apartment renting cost is between 20 thousand tk to even 2-3 lakh Tk, whereas, owning a same space is between 20 lakh to 40 lakhs. If a resident want to live there for a long time such as for 30-40 years, it is wise to buy an apartment than to rent one. But it varies not only in different countries but also in different regions of the same country. For instance, in any different city in the same country, the renting cost drastically plummets and it is better to rent than to own. Therefore, people think about the future and buys a permanent residence.
Secondly, there are other factors such as economic stablity leads to owning a permenent address. Moreover, owning a residence gives an individual a social status that some people crave for. Furthermore, in some jobs, there are easy downpayments for owning a house, so people opt for it.
Finally, in my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages to owning and renting homes. If there is a drastic calamity that leads to destruction of a house. Then, the owner suffers the most but if someone was renting it, there were no consequences for the renter. Sometimes, people do not have the ability to pay the full mortgage. Hence, this responsibility burdens over to the next generation. However, having a house, give you freedom to have a garden in front of it, or drill through the walls to mount gym equipments such as pull up bars.
In conlusion, the economical growth in countries lead people to own a home. There are significant advantages and disadvantages in both categories which are owning or renting a home. In my opinion, owning a home is better than renting one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...city of Bangladesh, the currency is Taka in short Tk, a two or three bedroom apar...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lakh' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lakhs'.
Suggestion: lakhs
...reas, owning a same space is between 20 lakh to 40 lakhs. If a resident want to live...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...advantages to owning and renting homes. If there is a drastic calamity that leads ...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...uch as pull up bars. In conlusion, the economical growth in countries lead people to own ...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... disadvantages in both categories which are owning or renting a home. In my opinion, ownin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7375647598 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528350515464 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2039855032 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350377949434 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989025502186 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645643292339 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19208798731 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478556257292 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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