In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
in many nations, it is believed that a private home plays a vital role in people's lives, therefore, residents lean to possess such dwell rather than leasing one. In my opinion, this trend stems from people's own nature and financial perspective. It also brings more benefits than drawbacks.
It is undeniable that having a private settlement is an instinct element of each individual over thousand of years due to the fact that our ancestors who might have to struggle in order to find secure inhabitations, caves in particular where they could protect their family members and themselves from potential dangers including poisonous reptiles and beasts. Nowadays, people desire to be ownership of a home in which parents and offsprings, even grandparents are provided basic convenient facilities such as living room, bedroom, and bathroom and all members could gather in the arms of lovers. In terms of financial view, owning a dwell helps possessors to save the amount of money from mortgages on a monthly basis, which means they could allocate it for other purposes, especially recreational activities, investment in children's education.
Meanwhile, there is a large variety of issues that renters who do not afford to buy a flat or an apartment occasionally resolve including not only mortgages mentioned above but also spend another amount of money on repairing small damages from facilities, walls or even the sanitary system now that landlords tend to embrace expenses raising from normal faults of a home in the leasing contract. Besides, homeowners also require tenants to leave some money as a deposit which avoids them breaking the contract as well as renters usually pay the high price for the usage of water and electricity. As a result, instead of accumulating the great amount of money that used for expenditures of dwell renting, they could spend on gaining more certificates which pave the way for their career with better incoming or even purchasing a flat on the instalment plan.
in conclusion, it seems to me that owning a home is considered as the nature of people and the financial angle and this phenomenon has more pros than cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09604519774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78113621229 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.200760454 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.4 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166783919504 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704243486755 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519034455831 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119986581659 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618945436769 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.